(Before)
"We’re leaving for South Beach tomorrow. Make sure you have enough clothes to last the whole weekend and don't forget - our flight is at 9AM. We can't afford to be late."
Let's tweak it up a bit.
(After)
"Pack your bags for a weekend getaway. All that I'm going to tell you is to be prepared for warm weather. Trust me, we're going to have an AMAZING time."
Wow...
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A) You said South Beach. Sick time, wish I was going there for the WMC :-(
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